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Disclaimer: OK I don't own any of the characters (really not even you) only the story line for this fanfiction... And really? If I owed Rise of the Guardians Jack would have been shirtless :)


"Jack help!"

You didn't have time to ask what the little girl meant. When you were about to, the water filled your mouth. You expected the water to freeze you but instead it burned you. It's was pain you couldn't describe; it was pain you couldn't control.

It wasn't that you didn't know how to swim, the problem was the moment you tried to go up, something pulled you down. It was almost as if the darkness below was trying to swallow you.

You remember your family. How you were supposed to go with your mom to do some Christmas shopping. Your (brother/sister) telling you to get out of (his/her) room. You remember your dad's last words to you...

"Don't let Jack Frost nip your nose."

'Well, he is doing more than that, actually,' you thought, slightly smiling.

When you were almost out of oxygen you heard a voice calling your name. It was a deep, soft voice that kept demanding you to stay awake.

You wanted to stay awake, but you were too tired. You slowly started to give up...

A flash of icy blue light was the last thing you saw before you fell asleep.


"Is she dead?"

"She is not dead, Sophie!"

"She looks pretty dead to me..."

A heavy sigh. "She is not dead."

"Her friend is still crying...Should I take (him/her) back to town?"

"Without me guiding you? I don't think so..."

"Well then, you take the twins and (bf/n) and I will keep an eye on her."

"Okay. And I will bring some clothes for her, before she really dies."

You stopped hearing and welcomed darkness again.


Before you even moved, you realized you were no longer cold. Your clothes were warmer, the air was not so crisp, you swore there was a fire crackling...you were definitely not outside.

You stood up from the bed you were laying on, only to fall back again.

"My head..." you mumbled. You touched your head and felt that your hair was still a little bit damped.

"Would you like hot cocoa?"

You gasped and this time you got up without falling. You saw the little blonde girl next to you holding two mugs filled with hot cocoa.

You looked around and realized you were inside the Frozen Shack. Inside a room in the Frozen Shack.

Still in shock, you didn't notice that the blonde girl sat next to you. "Jack said you should drink it..." She handled you the mug and you took it with trembling hands.

"Jack?" you asked after you took a sip of the hot beverage.

Suddenly the little girl became nervous. She looked away and didn't reply.

"Your name is Sophie, right?" You moved closer to the small girl.

She nodded.

"Thank you, Sophie," you whispered, truthfully thankful.

She looked up at you. Confusion spread all over her half-covered face. "Why?"

Closing your eyes, you said, "I don't remember much but you kept an eye on me while this Jack was away..."

Sophie almost choked on her drink. "Y-you heard that?"

You suppressed a laugh. "Why is it such a surprise?"

"Because you are not supposed to see me..."

You stopped breathing. That voice...

Shaking a little bit, you directed your eyes to the door.

Gasp.

A young man was casually lining against the door frame. He wasn't like anybody you had ever met in your life. His skin was paper-white but he had dark rings under his icy-blue eyes. He was only wearing a blue hoodie with some torn brown pants...and was he bare foot?! Next to him was a long wooded stick with a hook form at the end. And even though that was all odd to you, nothing was more bizarre than his snow-white spiky hair.

"Or hear me, as a matter of fact..." he continued.

Sophie jumped and went to the strange man's side and slide behind him. He looked back at her and smile softly. Under different circumstances you might have think this dude was good looking and that his smile was the sweetest thing you could ever taste...

'Focus, dammit,' you thought.

"W-who are you?" you asked, your voice smaller than you wanted.

He glared at you. Wait. He didn't glare at you - he stared at you in a way that made you want to crawl under a rock and never see the sun again.

"I am Jack. And you are in big trouble, miss..."

And just like that you weren't afraid any longer. "Excuse me?" You didn't care if this was the famous, untouchable, super-whatever Jack the kids told you not to bother - you were not going to deal with his attitude.

He walked closer to you. Now that you see him better, you realize there is frost over his hoodie and on his excessively long cane, which only made him more odd.

"You not only yelled at Sophie but also you pushed your other friend to the lake...and I might know a thing or two of breaking lakes," he murmured.

Sophie laughs. Then Jack laughs.

You crossed your arms. "Did I miss a joke?"

Still laughing softly, Jack replied, "More than one, (Y/n)."

"Should I leave?" Sophie asked Jack, already gathering her stuff next to the door.

"Are you sure you memorized the way, Soph? If you get lost your brother will hang me," Jack said. You notice his voice changed, becoming kinder and tender. Just like a big brother talking to his sister.

She nodded eagerly.

Jack ruffled her already-messy hair and waved her off.

You hear a door close. The Frozen Shack becomes colder somehow.

You swallow hard, thinking how on Earth are you taking this with so much calm. After all you were in the middle of nowhere, with a strange guy...in a bedroom...again in the middle of nowhere.

'Oh my God...I am gonna get raped!' Silly but it was your first thought.

With a deep breath you tired to calm yourself. There wasn't anything to worry about...Right?

Faster than your eyes could record, the boy named Jack was standing in front of you, wearing his deadly stare.

"How did you do it?" he asked. You wondered how can someone go from sweet guy to murderer mode.

"I am sorry but I don't think you are in a position in which you have rights to ask questions," you told him. "I just woke up inside this room with no idea who you are or what is going on! So, how about you answer my questions first?"

He chuckled. "But you are not in position of asking questions, either. Now, I'll ask you one more time: How did you do it?"

You sighed with desperation. "How did I did what?!"

"How were you able to see him?!"

"What now..?" Now you were sure this guy was also crazy.

That only seemed to make him angrier. You saw him lifting off the floor and the wind that you didn't know was inside started to blow. You wanted to run but your feet were somehow stuck to the floor.

"Speak now or perish with the consequences!"

"Umm...why are you floating?" That was all you could manage to say before ice began growing on you. It crept on you until you stop feeling your legs...torso...arms... Now you were all covered in ice except for you face.

Jack now nearly four feet off the ground used his cane to touch your face. "Pity, such a nice face..."

All you could do was stare at him in fear. You had no idea what was going on but one thing was for sure: just one movement and you will be dead.

"Pity, pity, pity..." he said in a low voice. He pulled his cane back but before it hit you the door opened again.

"Pitch Black, back off."
C'mon guys, did you seriously think I would make Jack hurt you? HA! We all know better... Now I know this all might be a little bit confusing but trust me Chapter five will clear all you doubts! Still you can note me your questions and I will answer you right away (: Please leave your comments/reviews! Fave this story too if you want (:

Chapter three ---> [link]

Chapter five ---> [link]

Btw...this is as far as I got my story on Fanfiction...so I am afraid you guys will have to wait a little bit longer for chapter five... but i will try to update soon! (: the more comments/fave/whatever you guys use to express your likeness to this the faster chapter five will be up!

Until then!!
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:iconlayla-mindora:
layla-mindora Featured By Owner May 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
At first i thought: 'WHAT THE F**K!!! IS JACK SICK OR SOMETHING!!??

And when i read:"Pitch Black, back off!!"
I thought: oooooooooh i am talking to pitch, who looks like Jack.
*facepalms* you got me there
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Melvey Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2014
I already knew someone was either gonna get r*ped, or get clomped straight across the face! XD
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:iconzeldaloverrrrrrrr:
Zeldaloverrrrrrrr Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I thought already that something wasn't right!
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:iconfreshwindlover:
FreshWindLover Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
the fact that you commented on chapter four made my day brighter<3
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Zeldaloverrrrrrrr Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Hahaha
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pandaday12 Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Uhm, not to be rude, but uhm the correct spelling of bear feet is bare feet.
I understand the confusion since they sound the same but have different meanings.
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FreshWindLover Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
OH shit! Haha oh trust me I do know the difference! Meh silly mistake for trying to type fast! Thank youuu!!!!
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pandaday12 Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
No problem! (I love the story)
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:iconfreshwindlover:
FreshWindLover Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
haha thank youu!
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GuardianAngell13 Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2013  Student General Artist
I knew there was something wrong with this picture!
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Zeldaloverrrrrrrr Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah, Jack and angry that way... Just not possible!
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GuardianAngell13 Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2014  Student General Artist
totally!
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:iconfreshwindlover:
FreshWindLover Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
;) i did my job well then
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:iconguardianangell13:
GuardianAngell13 Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2013  Student General Artist
you did indeed! :D
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Bilztwing Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Pitch please, that is not the Jack Frost we know, who are fun and mischievous. I thought Jack gonna hurt me but it was Pitch. 
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FreshWindLover Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
My mission here is DONE 

WAHAHAHAHAHHAA
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IncognitoMallard Featured By Owner May 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh.....oh SNAP. You had me scared so bad! I was all, "Jack? Jack, whut are u doing? Jack don't be mad! JACK STAHP!!!" OAO

So...that was Pitch? fO.o Now I'm really confused.....
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FreshWindLover Featured By Owner May 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I AM SO SORRY! haha it was honestly my reaction too when i wrote it like: "oh my...stahp! dont!"

yup it isss him xD
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IncognitoMallard Featured By Owner May 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
XD Okay, 'cause I was REALLY worried there for a second! :P Nice plot twist, tho. :D I guess it did its job, lol
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FreshWindLover Featured By Owner May 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
hahaha thank you i was hoping people would be surprised c:
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:iconincognitomallard:
IncognitoMallard Featured By Owner May 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
lol, then hats off to you; I really DID NOT see that coming. :XD:
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FreshWindLover Featured By Owner May 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
*Takes a bow* thank you thank youu
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amber232232 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2013
plz hurry
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:iconfreshwindlover:
FreshWindLover Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
as soon as dA stops being nasty with me D':
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amber232232 Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013
lol
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:iconvocaloidanimefan:
vocaloidanimefan Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I need moar this is way too exciting to stop X3 so if you can plz write moar???
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FreshWindLover Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
oh darling there is moar :D buuuuuuut idk some crazy shit is going on with my dA submitting process (i think it has to do with my laptop or my net) and i havent been able to find another computer D: but as soon as my computer decides to let me submit stuff i will submit all the chapters i have written so far (: so sorry though D:
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vocaloidanimefan Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
It's ok can wait for moar because I am still waiting, 2 months already, for one and the chapter it has left at was chapter 10 so I can wait if I love the story which I do! X3
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bleachyaoifangirl99 Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2013
I'm gonna watch you for this :D
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:iconfreshwindlover:
FreshWindLover Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
And I am going to thank you for it!


Thank you <3
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bleachyaoifangirl99 Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2013
You're welcome!^_^
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muckypup57 Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Please write more this is awesome
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:iconfreshwindlover:
FreshWindLover Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
OH i have written more it just some witchcraft crap happened to my dA submit button and i can't upload anything....i am trying to fix itt
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BloodyxNightmair Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2013
:iconmoarplz:
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:iconfreshwindlover:
FreshWindLover Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
wow i love that emoticon...

soon i am really trying :C
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BloodyxNightmair Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2013
Hehe thanks, and lol :iconlatiosyayplz: lol you can take your time, a good story always takes time to be written~!
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:iconfreshwindlover:
FreshWindLover Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
oh no i meant dA won't let me upload D: or idk if it's my laptop...i am trying to fix it xD
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BloodyxNightmair Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2013
Ahhhh that sucks lol well hope fully you'll find out the problem soon.x3
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kibby99 Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
<MMMMMMMMMMMMOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
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FreshWindLover Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
<SSSSSSSSSSSSOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNNNNNNNNN

as soon as dA starts to work properly for me that is...
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kibby99 Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
OK YAY
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ForeverJACK Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013
I can't wait for more this is awesome!
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FreshWindLover Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Soon i am trying to make my dA work properly!! (: thankssssss
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ForeverJACK Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2013
No problem! good luck
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:iconfreshwindlover:
FreshWindLover Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thankkkksss
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SapphieTaffy Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Can't wait for more, you're absolutely AWESOME!!
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FreshWindLover Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
And I can't wait for my submit button to work C: (THANK YOUUUuUUUUU!)
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xxAlaskanChickxx Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2013  Student Artist
Y U NO POST CHAPTER FIVE!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! :iconwhyyounoplz:

Just kidding, but really!?!?!?! Now I have to wait!?!?!?!?!?!? *dies*
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FreshWindLover Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
haha I am truly sorry! i will explain today in a journal why i havent been able to post chapter 5! BUT WORRY NOT BECAUSE I HAVE NO INTENTIONS OF ABANDONING THIS STORY! C:
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Den2AkitaNeru Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2013
cant.stop.fan.girling.!!!! :la:
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